My Feedback about Rough Cut 2

What went well ? 

• The sound that we added when the balloon is falling works in a very effective way  along with the slow motion added  to the same scene as well.
• In this rough cut you can see that we've added a rewind of the attack to emphasize the idea that we are going  back in time. It worked well because  gives the audience a clearer view about what happened to Mia.

What did no went well ? 

• The effects added   in the establishing shots look very ineffective : 

1. the effect on the building
2. the change of colour in the house is not consistent, so appears to have no meaning

• the last establishing shot is unnecessary because the shot before shows exactly the same thing.
• Some of the establishing shots are too quick, the  audience  cannot see them properly.
• Is not clear that the attacker took off the scarf of  Mia 
• When the attacker hits Mia the scene looks a little dark which contrasts, when the next scene shows her running (this is before she runs downhill )  which lighter. This makes the edit look clumsy. 
• The close up of Mia's feet running is too slow.
• The red colour added on the tree does not work at all because again is not consistent throughout the title sequence. 
• Party scene still too long.

What it needs to be improved ? 

• Make establishing shots even in time, so i will use slow motion to do so. 
• Improve sound.
• Take off the red colour in the scene of the trees.
• Take off the darkness added when the attacker hits Mia.
• Use fast motion in the scene of  Mia's feet  running.
• Delete the last establishing shot.
• Decide the effects we will be using in the establishing shots, be consistent with it. 
• Include to the title sequence the scene when the attacker takes off Mia's scarf.
• Do some close  ups on the party scene.
• Make end clearer.